Fall ushers a vestige to
a summer romance
Leaves descend where
the memories fade
Stilly conserved to reanimate
willing love to return
Into the winter doldrums
lamenting for spring
Raptured out of the tragedy
the birds breast sings
Spring warms the embers
enkindling summers embrace
There is an entire website dedicated to cliches, here. In fact, it has dawned on me that most of my personal poetry is just that, cliche. As well as most poetry I read! Let me share with you the “original” poem that inspired the re-work of this unoriginal poem above. It reads, Fall brings an end to a summer love. Leaves drop and the memories fade. Resources save to regrow a love to return. From the winter blues my heart must relearn. To spring forth into anew. I liked the idea of the poem and this was actually written in protest of a romance that, I knew from previous experiences, would be “falling back” into an acquaintanceship – oh the irony. Nevertheless, this was an opportunity to poke fun of cliche poetry, keep things light-hearted and enjoy the challenge of evolving a piece. By the way…jokes on me because that romance blossomed and you know what that means – more cliche poetry.


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